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[Ajnabee]

bohat umdaah ........... bilkul samne ki aur choti choti cheezen jinhen shayaeri main nazar andaz ker dia jata hai aapne usko yahan ajagar kia hai ,shayari to khub hai per shayeri se zyadah aapke khayal khubsoorat lagay ........keep it up

[CaLmInG MeLoDy]

bohat umdaah ........... bilkul samne ki aur choti choti cheezen jinhen shayaeri main nazar andaz ker dia jata hai aapne usko yahan ajagar kia hai ,shayari to khub hai per shayeri se zyadah aapke khayal khubsoorat lagay ........keep it up

bohot bohot nawaazish. ap ne isko umda kaha..ye aur bhi acha laga. iske ilaawa nazar andaz ho jane waale pehloouon ko ujaagar karti lagi aap ko ye poetry.is ke liye main aap ki thankful hon. kion ke meri ye poetry is hi pe based thi.aur har koi samajh nahi paata is baat ko