Quote Originally Posted by Veedoo View Post
bahi jii app bi arsahad ki tarh samnjna nahi chathe ,tu yehi leekhon ga,bas
umda kam hai,khush rahin,app loog better nahi hona chate tu nahi sehi,phir nei kehna kisi ne batyia nahi ,so sad,
Oh ho ayse naraz to na ho jayen. Main koshish to kerta hun, lekin mature nahi hun. Naye kuchh experiment me galtiya mumkin hai. aur lazmi bhi. Ap agar nahi bataiyega kahan galat kiya to kayse main usper dheyan dunga. Issey pehle font selection sahi nahi huwa tha. Is bar main is per dheyean diya. Yeh colage frame bhi ek experiment tha. Pehla kam hai is idea per. Galti kuchh hai lekin apke nazar me main kahan galat hun plz bataiye.