Bask e sushwar hai her kam ka asan hona.

[Daniel-7]

main shair mai mistakes hain
niche wala thek likha hoa hai

Han ho sakta hai. Main abhi tak urdu pura sikh nahi saka. but if u indicated that mistake..I could take a chance to correct that.

bahi jii kam acha karthe hain leken app shairy samnj kar design nehi karthe ,is sher ka egg se kaya talq hai,
design ko design karne se pehle us sher ka matlab kisi se pooch kar design keya karin phir app us ko khubsoort se design kar sakin gey,?

Main shayri samjh ker hi design kiya tha. Socha tha main is comment ke jawab nahi dunga, Lekin apke is remark per aur log bhi aysa soch sakte hain is liye yeh jawab.
her kam asan nahi hota her kisi ke liye. keyun ke wo skill nahi hote, wo right way dhund nahi patey, wo kam ko pechida ker detey hain and more various cozes remain there. Insan bhi aysa hi hain. Kuchh log ke akal mature nahi hota, kuchh galat soch ke hote hain, kuchh insaniyat se koi talluk nahi rakhte. Main yehi lana chaha apne design me, ke kuchh log apne akal ke, insaniyat ke, charche nahi kartey. Wo etney nadan hotey hain jayse abhi aeye hain duniya per, Ek egg shell hi unke duniya hai. Wo sirf khud ko ley ker busy rahe, Apne ander hi gum rahe. Apne duniya me hi ghumt rahe. Wo us shell se bahar aakar kisi ke koi kam na aeye. Design aur cheez hai. Lekin usme abstract thoughts aur cheez hai. Yeh bat thik nahi ke main shayeri ko nahi samjh ker design karta hun.

وعلیکم السلام
انتخاب کلام اور کام
عمدہ

Thanks Habib bhai.