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Tumharay repu comment ka jawab ye hai kOriginally Posted by CaLmInG MeLoDy
jab tak tehreer mukammal parh naa li thi...anjaam e tehreer tak na pohonchi thi..tab tak khayaal aa raha tha.haaaaaaaaaaaaye...kia dil se nikle alfaaz hain. aisa lag raha hai.jaise direct apne hi dil main baith ke kaghaz par qalam se alfaz utaar diye...
par aap toh jaanti hian..is hawaale se..tehreer mukammal hone ke baad.main kahan itna hosla rakhti hon. ke dil khol ke hans bhi loon.aur keh bhi doon ke ... baat toh sach hai magar baat hai ruswai ki
parhne main itni rawaangi mehsoos ho rahi thi.toh in sab halaat ko bhaampny main kis qadar rawaangi rahi hogi.I can understand.
halaanke mukamal tehreer jab nahi parhi thi.tab bhi gumaan guzara tha ke..koi jaane pehchaane insan hain. magar jab tehreer mukammal ho li..toh ghiggi bandh gai..
choonke aap toh bol leeen.ham bole toh seedhe kaan dhar liye jaawainge..
aisa koi shandar naqsha naweesi ki hai.ke kia koi naqsha nawees aisi manzar kashi kare ga....... tinnd ka zikar na hota.toh khud maasoom ko is ataab ka shikar samjhti rehti.wo to bhala ho.ke tinnd aur phir end main naam se aagah kar dia aap ne...
warna ghutnoun main sir diye baithi rehti..........
aap dua kijiye ga..ke mera reply koi na parhe..kion ke ataab se dar laage hai.
bohot umda likha hia.. qalam ki maahiraana salaahitaain paish ki hain aap ne...
aur andaza ho paa raha hai..ke aisi himmat tabhi pai hai..jab mohtram ne tinnd karwaai hai..
Mamin darti warti kisi say nahi hai.... Aur mujhe achi tarhan maloom hai muhtaram ko urdu samjh kakh nahi ani
Iradon ko choro....meray mood ki khatarnaki ka andaza tumhay title parh k hojana chahiye tha.
Mujhe khud andaza nahi tha k main bigray mood main zehan behter dora laiti hoon
Demagh ko laga zang arsay baad utra hai tum zara idhar udhar hojana kahin zad main aakar zakhmi na hojana
Beta ji tumhay tind bhi samjh nahi ani thi jo agar tinday say waqfiyat na hoti
Tehreer parhnay aur sarhanay ka behad shukriya
Nahi ata koi atab....kiyun k muhtaram ko tou dor rehna hai na forum k mamlat say
Khud yahan aakar jhank jain..........naam badal dongi muhtaram ka
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