Daagh Dehelvi Design No.1

[Anu]

Assalam o Alaikum is gazal ko . two times design kia hai.. infact main practice kar rahi hon..big gazal ko design karne ki..this is my first experience.
kindly guid karain. thnx.
@Veedoo

achi aur bht tough koshish ki hy lakin pehle wale se yeh achi laghi clear nazar tu aa rahi hy na