Quote Originally Posted by Rana Taimoor Ali View Post
kuch lagne se tareef nahi ki jati
jub 2 baray apas me baat ker rae hun
to darmiyaan me nae bolty bachay

Quote Originally Posted by CaLmInG MeLoDy View Post
poetry karne wali koun hai?

kahin ye poetry aap ki toh nahi?
really?
oh wow.phir toh sone pe suhaaga...

bas lafzoun ko alfaaz likha hota.toh baat ban jati..lafzoun likhne se..urdu ki mistake hui hai...par nimmm raww..kasmee..shandar poetry hai..bohot umda...

nimmi nimmi nimm raww..tussi naraz ho..?
tussi naraz na ho na
tussi maan jaow na..

jee janab
ghalti se meri e the

q k aap ne original thread dekha e nahi

or agr laafzon k jagha alfaaz use krti
to phr wo maza na rehta

jo lafzon ki spontaneity me aya