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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


      Last edited by Mamin Mirza; 01-09-2016 at 10:24 AM.
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      main aam sa hamesha
      tu khas sa musalsal..!
      Ik Zamana Hai Muj se Khai'f Sa
      Baat Ko'i To Infirad'i hai


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      dhonday ga wo mujhay inhe galiyon main ek din
      dhonday ga or mujko na paae ga dair tak
      niyat-e-shauq bhar na jaye kahin
      tu bhi dil se utar na jaye kahin


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Ab ehsaas teri be-rukhi ka yun mitaayein gey

      Ay kam-nigah hum b tujhe bhool jayein gey
      Nahi hain woh TARK -E- TA'ALUQ pe raazi
      Qayamat hai k hum samjha rahe hain
      Ajab kuch rabt hai tumse k tumko
      Apna jaan'kar hum thukraa rahe hain


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      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Nahi hain woh TARK -E- TA'ALUQ pe raazi
      Qayamat hai k hum samjha rahe hain
      Ajab kuch rabt hai tumse k tumko
      Apna jaan'kar hum thukraa rahe hain
      Woh paani ki bundein woh barsaat ka mausam,
      Woh teri khushboo woh tere ehasas ka mausam.
      Bahut yaad aaya tujh se bichhadne ke baad,
      Woh tera milna woh teri mulaqaat ka mausam …!!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      YahaaN tO kUch Bhii mUmkin hAi K Yeh Raah e mUhabbat hAi
      WahaaN Bhi Jeena PaRta hAi JahaaN Jeewan Nahii Rehta
      Uss ki aankhen jo kabhi shair sunaane lag jaayen,
      jitni ghazlein hain zamane mein, thikaane lag jaayen …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      Baaton mein sirf tanz nahin dard-e-dil bhi hai
      duniya peh hans raha hoon magar aab'deedah bhi hoon
      Barsaat ke mausam mein kabhi mere ghar aa ke dekh,
      khushboo ajeeb hoti hai kachche makaan ki. !!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Main toh ek dard hun saahab !
      aur dard bhala kaun sehta hai .. ?


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Uss ki aankhen jo kabhi shair sunaane lag jaayen,
      jitni ghazlein hain zamane mein, thikaane lag jaayen …!
      Janey kitney dost meray pathar key bot ban jain..
      Is khof sey dey nahi sakta mein awaz kisi ko.!!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Barsaat ke mausam mein kabhi mere ghar aa ke dekh,
      khushboo ajeeb hoti hai kachche makaan ki. !!
      Khwaab Raaston Se Phir Wapsi Kahan Mumkin
      Khwab K Musafir Ko Khwab maar Dete Hain


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Main toh ek dard hun saahab !
      aur dard bhala kaun sehta hai .. ?
      Dunia Mere Mizaj Say Thi Mukhtalif Bohat,
      Apna Alaag Jahan Basana Para Mujhe .. !!


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