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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


      Last edited by Mamin Mirza; 01-09-2016 at 10:24 AM.
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Saja kar apni hi aankh hazaar chehron pe,
      kiya hai maine sadaa aitbaar chehron pe.
      Main teri bazm mein kis kis se dushmani leta?
      likha tha naam tera be’shumaar chehron pe …!
      Bhari mehfil me mujh ko dekh kr wo Ghair ban jaye
      Mujhe ye maslihat andeshiyan achi nahe lagti


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      thanxsiso shair samjh nahi aaya:D
      Wo sab mix hogaya hehe koi nahi ye sune

      Chaand Nikla Na Tum Ne Dastak Di,

      Aaj Ki Shaam Kitni Bojhal Hai …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      Bhari mehfil me mujh ko dekh kr wo Ghair ban jaye
      Mujhe ye maslihat andeshiyan achi nahe lagti
      Meri Dhadkan Ki Bandish Pe Zaamane Ke Masa Ne,

      Mohabbat Ko Toh Ghum Likha Tujhe Uski “Dawa” Likha …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Khyaalon mein wahi, sapno mein wahi
      lekin unki yaadon mein hum the hi nahin
      Hum jaagte rahe duniya soti rahi
      ek baarish hi thi, jo humare saath roti rahi …!
      tu bhi sada hy kabhi chaal badalta hi nhe
      ham bhi sada hain isi chaal main ajaty hen


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Ajab Tilissm Hai Tere Wajood Ka Mujh Par,

      Toota Mera Har Khawaab Magar Yeh Nahi Toota …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Wo sab mix hogaya hehe koi nahi ye sune

      Chaand Nikla Na Tum Ne Dastak Di,

      Aaj Ki Shaam Kitni Bojhal Hai …!
      okey rehny dijye yhi teekh hai...


      Bin Maange He Mil Jaati Hain Tabeerain Kisi Ko Faraz .

      Koi Khaali Hath Reh Jaata Hai Haazaroon Duaaon K Baad .


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      okey rehny dijye yhi teekh hai...


      Bin Maange He Mil Jaati Hain Tabeerain Kisi Ko Faraz .

      Koi Khaali Hath Reh Jaata Hai Haazaroon Duaaon K Baad .
      Yun Toh Rehmat Hai Teri, Tere Ghazab Pe Haawi,

      Phir Bhi Mehshar Mein KHUDAYA Mera Parda Rakhna …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Meri Dhadkan Ki Bandish Pe Zaamane Ke Masa Ne,

      Mohabbat Ko Toh Ghum Likha Tujhe Uski “Dawa” Likha …!
      Kahin Tanha Na Kar De Tujhe Munfrid Rehne Ka Shoq Faraz,
      Jub Din Dhale Tu Kisi Se Haal-E-Dil Keh Dia Kar.


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      Kahin Tanha Na Kar De Tujhe Munfrid Rehne Ka Shoq Faraz,
      Jub Din Dhale Tu Kisi Se Haal-E-Dil Keh Dia Kar.
      Kitne Suljhe Hue Tareeqe Se,

      Mujh Ko Uljhan Mein Daal Dete Ho …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      Har Jurm Meri Zaat Say Mansoob Huwa Hai…
      Kya Mere Siwa Shehr Mein Masoom Hain Saare


      بس اس لیئے ہر کام ادھورا ہی پڑا ہے
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