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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


      Last edited by Mamin Mirza; 01-09-2016 at 10:24 AM.
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      کیا ایسے کم سخن سے کوئی گفتگو کرے
      جو مستقل سکوت سے دل کو لہو کرے



      کہتے ہیں فرشتے کہ دل آویز ہے مومن
      حوروں کو شکایت ہے کم آمیز ہے مومن

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Aaj To Dekh He Lein Haath Laga Kar UsKo.....!

      Woh Koii Khawab Nahi Hai Jo Bikhar Jaayega....!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      ہاتھ اُلجھے ہوئے ریشم میں پھنسا بیٹھے ہیں
      اب بتا! کون سے دھاگے کو جُدا کس سے کریں



      کہتے ہیں فرشتے کہ دل آویز ہے مومن
      حوروں کو شکایت ہے کم آمیز ہے مومن

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Mein Ksay Soch Saktiii Thii Mujhe Wo Chorrr Jaaye Gaa..,

      Bohat He BAA'WAFA...,Woh BE'WAFA Honay Se Pehlay Thaa.!! —


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!



      سوجھ بوجھ سے دیواریں مضبوط بنا
      گر جاتے ہیں کچے گھر برساتوں میں



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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Pehle Barish Hoti Thi To Yaad Aty The
      Ab Jab Yaad Aty Ho To Barish Hoti Hai...
      @Aliza


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Pehle Barish Hoti Thi To Yaad Aty The
      Ab Jab Yaad Aty Ho To Barish Hoti Hai...
      @Aliza
      Thank u janaab yaha mention karne k liye


      Tum meri aankh ke baare mein bahut poochhte ho,
      ye woh khidki hai jo dariya ki taraf khulti hai …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Thank u janaab yaha mention karne k liye


      Tum meri aankh ke baare mein bahut poochhte ho,
      ye woh khidki hai jo dariya ki taraf khulti hai …!
      hmmm apk aaane se bahargai yha

      Aisa Badla Hun Tere Sheher Ka Pani Pi Kar
      Jhoot Bolun To Nadamat Nahi Hoti Mujh Ko
      Ab Koi Aye Chala Jaye Main Khush Rehta Hun
      Ab Kisi Shakhs Ki Adat Nahi Hoti Mujh Ko...


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      hmmm apk aaane se bahargai yha

      Aisa Badla Hun Tere Sheher Ka Pani Pi Kar
      Jhoot Bolun To Nadamat Nahi Hoti Mujh Ko
      Ab Koi Aye Chala Jaye Main Khush Rehta Hun
      Ab Kisi Shakhs Ki Adat Nahi Hoti Mujh Ko...
      Har saans ukhad jaane ki koshish mein pareshaan,
      seene mein koi hai jo giraftaar bahut hai …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Har saans ukhad jaane ki koshish mein pareshaan,
      seene mein koi hai jo giraftaar bahut hai …!
      Koi To Dard Ki Had Ho Jahan Ye Dil Thehre
      Kahin To Chaaon Ho Aisi K Dum Lia Jaye

      Bikhar Bikhar Si Gai Hai Tamam Hasti Hi
      Rafu Karen Bhi To Kya Aur Kya Siya Jaye...


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