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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

    1. 12-25-2015, 06:47 PM #1
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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے
      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے       داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری

      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے

      اب آپ کی باری


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    3. 11-12-2017, 07:23 PM #331
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Chalta hun aasmaan ki taraf dekhta hua,
      mere sar pe sitaare na aa giren kahin …!
      yon hi mausam ki ada dekh k yaad aya hy
      kis qadar jald badal jaty hein insaan janaa

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      yon hi mausam ki ada dekh k yaad aya hy
      kis qadar jald badal jaty hein insaan janaa
      Mere din badalne waale hain shayad,
      ab mujhe raaton ko neend aati hai. !

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Azal Ki KhUshbOo hO jis mieN PinhaaN kOii Bataye tO Naam Aisa
      wO Naam e Ahmed (SAWW) Keh PhOol barsieN Byaan Aisa Kalaam Aisa

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Azal Ki KhUshbOo hO jis mieN PinhaaN kOii Bataye tO Naam Aisa
      wO Naam e Ahmed (SAWW) Keh PhOol barsieN Byaan Aisa Kalaam Aisa
      Kaun Kehta hai waqt marta nahin,
      hum ne saalon ko khatm hote dekha hai december mein …!

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Aaj Waqt Le Aaya Hai Mujhe apni He Dukaan Par..!

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Kaun Kehta hai waqt marta nahin,
      hum ne saalon ko khatm hote dekha hai december mein …!
      Wah ji wah


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      Azal Ki KhUshbOo hO jis mieN PinhaaN kOii Bataye tO Naam Aisa
      wO Naam e Ahmed (SAWW) Keh PhOol barsieN Byaan Aisa Kalaam Aisa
      Na Chaand Apna Tha Or Na Toh Apna Tha,
      Kash Dil Bhi Maan Leta Keh Sb Sapna Tha..!!

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Kuch Bhi Na Raha Yaad Hamein tUjh Sey BiChr Key
      mUdat hOii KhUd Apna Pata DhOond Rahey hAin
      Tajdeed e mUlaqaat Kii kOii SOorat Nahii Bantii
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!


      ہاتھ الجھے ہوئے ریشم میں پھنسا بیٹھے ہیں
      اب بتا!کون سے دھاگے کوجدا،کس سے کریں
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Lonely_Vampire View Post
      Na Chaand Apna Tha Or Na Toh Apna Tha,
      Kash Dil Bhi Maan Leta Keh Sb Sapna Tha..!!
      Afsanon Ki Duniya Mein Sab Jho0t Nahin Hota
      Dil Aur Bhi Uljhe Ga Padhiya Na Kitabon KO..........!!!!!

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