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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


      Last edited by Mamin Mirza; 01-09-2016 at 10:24 AM.
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Koi To Dard Ki Had Ho Jahan Ye Dil Thehre
      Kahin To Chaaon Ho Aisi K Dum Lia Jaye

      Bikhar Bikhar Si Gai Hai Tamam Hasti Hi
      Rafu Karen Bhi To Kya Aur Kya Siya Jaye...
      Tumhen bhi neend si aane lagi hai.. thak gaye hum bhi,
      chalo hum aaj ye qissa adhoora chhod dete hain …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Tumhen bhi neend si aane lagi hai.. thak gaye hum bhi,
      chalo hum aaj ye qissa adhoora chhod dete hain …!
      Chalo Guftagu Tamam Karte Hain
      Tere Sakoon Ka Ehtamam Karte Hain
      Zamany Bhar K Aib Hain Hum Main
      Tujh Ko Aliza Salaam Karte Hain...


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Chalo Guftagu Tamam Karte Hain
      Tere Sakoon Ka Ehtamam Karte Hain
      Zamany Bhar K Aib Hain Hum Main
      Tujh Ko Aliza Salaam Karte Hain...
      Wsalam ji..

      Riwaayaton ki qataaren tod kar badho warna,
      jo tum se aage hain woh raasta nahin denge …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Wsalam ji..

      Riwaayaton ki qataaren tod kar badho warna,
      jo tum se aage hain woh raasta nahin denge …!
      Mere Chehre Se Mera Dard Na Parh Paoge Alex

      Meri Aadat Hai Har Bat Par Muskura Dena...


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Mere Chehre Se Mera Dard Na Parh Paoge Alex

      Meri Aadat Hai Har Bat Par Muskura Dena...
      Uss ki aankhen jo kabhi shair sunaane lag jaayen,
      jitni ghazlein hain zamane mein, thikaane lag jaayen …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Uss ki aankhen jo kabhi shair sunaane lag jaayen,
      jitni ghazlein hain zamane mein, thikaane lag jaayen …!
      Sirf Aankhon Ko Dekh Kar Kar Li Tum Se Mohabbat
      Chor Dia Apne Muqaddar Ko Tere Naqab K Pichy.


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Sirf Aankhon Ko Dekh Kar Kar Li Tum Se Mohabbat
      Chor Dia Apne Muqaddar Ko Tere Naqab K Pichy.
      Uss ke aansoo hi bataate the na ab lautega woh,
      iss se pehle toh bichhadte waqt yun rota na tha …!


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      Uss ke aansoo hi bataate the na ab lautega woh,
      iss se pehle toh bichhadte waqt yun rota na tha …!
      Wo Meri Rooh Ki Chadar Me Chup Gaya Aise
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Wo Meri Rooh Ki Chadar Me Chup Gaya Aise
      K Rooh Nikle To Wo Nikle, Jo Wo Nikle To Rooh Nikle...
      Hansne pe bhi aa jaate hain besaakhta aansoo,
      kuchh log mujhe aisi dua de ke gaye hain …!


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      Hansty Hain To Aankhon Se Nikal Aty Hain Ansoo
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