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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


      Last edited by Mamin Mirza; 01-09-2016 at 10:24 AM.
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by King_Alex_ View Post
      Are Tum Bi Nikle Ho Wafa Ki Talash Main
      Yaqeen Mano Nahi Milti, Nahi Milti, Nahi Milti
      Qabooliyat ki tamaam raahen khuli hain lekin,

      Main kya krun ki meri duaayen ajeeb si hain …!i


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Jahan sawal k badlai sawal hota hai
      Wahan sai muhabbaton ka zawal hota hai
      Kisi ko apna banana hunar hi sahi
      Kisi ka ban k rehna kamal hota hai



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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Ubaid View Post
      aj fursat hai
      To post karo mere sath


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Ubaid View Post
      Jahan sawal k badlai sawal hota hai
      Wahan sai muhabbaton ka zawal hota hai
      Kisi ko apna banana hunar hi sahi
      Kisi ka ban k rehna kamal hota hai
      Itna Naazuk Ayena Rakhna Zaruri To Nahi
      Toot'ta Hai Dil To Dil Badal Ker Dekh Lo


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Mai apnai dosti ko shehir mai ruswa nahi karta ............

      Muhabbat mai bhi karta hon, magar charcha nahi karta..




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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Kesai samjhai merai roog

      Andhai, Gongai, behrai loog

      In k samnai sab bekar hai

      Ahien, Nohai, Matam, Soog



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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Ubaid View Post
      Mai apnai dosti ko shehir mai ruswa nahi karta ............

      Muhabbat mai bhi karta hon, magar charcha nahi karta..

      wo jo rastay thay wafa ke thay' yeh jo manzilain hain saza ki hain
      mera hamsafer koi or tha' mera hamnasheen koi or hay


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Ubaid View Post
      Kesai samjhai merai roog

      Andhai, Gongai, behrai loog

      In k samnai sab bekar hai

      Ahien, Nohai, Matam, Soog
      jinhain haasil hai tera qurb, khush qismat sahi lekin

      teri hasrat liye marr jane waley aur hote hain


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      jinhain haasil hai tera qurb, khush qismat sahi lekin

      teri hasrat liye marr jane waley aur hote hain
      Jab Tak wO Be-NishaaN Raha Dastras Mein Tha
      Khush Naam hO Gya tO hUmara Nahi Raha



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