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    1. 12-25-2015, 06:47 PM #1
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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے
      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے       داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری

      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے

      اب آپ کی باری


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    3. 01-02-2016, 12:23 AM #81
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Sare Tor ho, Sar e Hashr Ho, Hmain Intezar Qabool hai
      Wo kbi Milain wo Kahen milain Wo kbi Sahi Wo kahen sahi

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    5. 01-02-2016, 01:00 AM #82
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      JO Ho Faisla Woh Sunaiye,Usay Hashar Par Na Uthaiye
      Jo Karain Ge Aap Sitam Wahan Woh Abhi Sahi Woh Yaheen Sahi...!

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      عجزِ اہل ستم کی بات کرو
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    9. 01-02-2016, 08:15 AM #84
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Dukh Day Kar Sawaal Kartay ho,Tum Bhe GHAALiB ! Kamaal Kartay ho..Daikh Kar Pooch Liyaa haal meraa,Chalo...

      Kis Ki Kya Majal Thi Jo Koi Hum Ko Kharid Sakta Faraz,..Hum Tu Khud Hi Bik Gaye Kharidar DekhKe..?
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    11. 01-02-2016, 09:43 AM #85
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Qassssoorrrr.....!
      Dilllll Kaaaa....!
      Aaaaankh Baniiiii Samandar,,,
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      Saza Isssshhqqq Kii
      Badnam tha bechara December...

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    13. 01-02-2016, 11:36 AM #86
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      خواہش کا نام عشق، نمائش کا نام حُسن
      اہلِ ہوس نے دونوں کی مٹی خـــــراب کی


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    17. 01-02-2016, 06:05 PM #88
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Kuch Kehnay Ka Ye Waqt Nahi Kuch Na Kaho Khamosh Raho
      Aye Logon Khamosh Raho,haan Aye Logon Khamosh Raho...!

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Kuch Kehnay Ka Ye Waqt Nahi Kuch Na Kaho Khamosh Raho
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      ستم پر شرطِ خاموشی بھی اس نے ناگہاں رکھ دی​

      کہ اک تلوار اپنے اور ،میرے درمیا ں رکھ دی​



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