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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


      Last edited by Mamin Mirza; 01-09-2016 at 10:24 AM.
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Kitnay nadaan hain kiya sadgi say puchtay hain,
      kahiye,kiya meri kisi baat pay rona aya........!!!!!!

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Ye kesa jheel mai'n Aks-e-Qamar ka Jadu Haiii...
      Ruky Hoay B Tumhi Ho Rawa'n Dawa'n B Tumhi Ho...



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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Manzar Ka Rang Asal Main Saya Hai Rang Ka,
      Jisne Isay Jidhar Say Bhi Dekha Badal Gaya.....!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Manzar Ka Rang Asal Main Saya Hai Rang Ka,Jisne Isay Jidhar Say Bhi Dekha Badal Gaya.....!
      Dost Kya Khoob Wafaon Ka Sila Dete Hain, Har Naye Mod Par Ek rang Naya Dete Hain, Tum Se To Khair Ghadi Bhar Ki Mulakat Rahi, Log Bars...

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Manzar Ka Rang Asal Main Saya Hai Rang Ka,
      Jisne Isay Jidhar Say Bhi Dekha Badal Gaya.....!


      اوڑھے ہوئے ہیں کب سے ردائے سراب ہم
      ذروں میں دیکھتے ہیں ستاروں کے خواب ہم










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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      وقت نے آرزو کی لَو دیر ہوئی بجھا بھی دی
      اب بھی پگھل رہے ہیں آپ، آپ بہت عجیب ہیں

      !میری زمیں میرا آخری حوالہ ہے۔۔۔۔

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      وقت نے آرزو کی لَو دیر ہوئی بجھا بھی دی اب بھی پگھل رہے ہیں آپ، آپ بہت عجیب ہیں
      زحمتِ ضربتِ دگر دوست کو دیجئے نہیں گر کے سنبھل رہے ہیں آپ، آپ بہت عجیب ہیں

      Kis Ki Kya Majal Thi Jo Koi Hum Ko Kharid Sakta Faraz,..Hum Tu Khud Hi Bik Gaye Kharidar DekhKe..?

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Main bhi bohat ajeeb hun, Itna ajeeb hun k Bus...
      Khud ko Tabaah ker liya aur Malaal bhi Naheen...


      !میری زمیں میرا آخری حوالہ ہے۔۔۔۔

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Kitnay nadaan hain kiya sadgi say puchtay hain,
      kahiye,kiya meri kisi baat pay rona aya........!!!!!!
      Shama khamosh, dil afsurda, nigah’ein be-noor.!!
      Hum ney dekhi hai qayamat shab-e-tanhai ki..


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      اوڑھے ہوئے ہیں کب سے ردائے سراب ہم
      ذروں میں دیکھتے ہیں ستاروں کے خواب ہم






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