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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Waqt Hai Jhonka Hawa Ka Aur Hum Peeley Pattay
      Kon Jaane Agle Lamhe Tum Kahan Aur Hum Kahan……!!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Muqaddar Azmane Main Zamanay Beet Jatay Hain Muradain Dil Ki Panay Main Zamanay Beet Jatay Hain Rakhta Agar Koi Himat Azhar-E Ulfaat KiZaban Par Baat Lane Mein Zamanay Beet Jatay Hain Muhabat Zindagi Main Joh Bari Mushkil Se Milti Hai Magar Us Kay Nibahne Mein Zamanay Beet Jatay Hein Agar Ik Bar Ankhon Mein Achanak A Basay Koi Usay Dil Se Bhulane Main Zamanay Beet Jatay Hain.

      Kis Ki Kya Majal Thi Jo Koi Hum Ko Kharid Sakta Faraz,..Hum Tu Khud Hi Bik Gaye Kharidar DekhKe..?

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      فیض دلوں کے بھاگ میں ہے گھر بھرنا بھی، لُٹ جانا بھی
      تم اس حسن کے لطف و کرم پہ کتنے دن اتراؤ گے

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      itne dino se jalane nai ae jalti hui aag ko bhuja ne nai ae kehte the sat jiyen ge sat maren geab rooth gia hon to manane bhi nai ae

      Kis Ki Kya Majal Thi Jo Koi Hum Ko Kharid Sakta Faraz,..Hum Tu Khud Hi Bik Gaye Kharidar DekhKe..?

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Khud Say Roothon Tou Kai Roz Na Khud Say Bolon,
      Phir Kisi Dard Ki Deewar Say Lag Kar Roo Loon......!

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Dard ki dewar per fariyad likha karte hai Har rat tanhai ko abad kia karte hai A khuda unnhein jarur khush rakhna Jinhe hum Saans sy bhi pehle yaad kia karte hai

      Kis Ki Kya Majal Thi Jo Koi Hum Ko Kharid Sakta Faraz,..Hum Tu Khud Hi Bik Gaye Kharidar DekhKe..?

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by muzafar ali View Post
      dard ki dewar per fariyad likha karte hai har rat tanhai ko abad kia karte hai a khuda unnhein jarur khush rakhna jinhe hum saans sy bhi pehle yaad kia karte hai
      muhtaram sirf shair post karain,sirf aik shair
      puri puri ghazal ya qata'at nahi.....!

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Issay Naqadri e Alam Ka Sila Kehtay Hain,
      Mar Gaye Hum Tou Zamanay Ne Bohat Yaad Kiya.


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Ban Jaye Pyar Saza Tu Kaisa Lage Ga...Khud Se Bhi Ziada Yakeen Ho Tume Kisi Per....Wo Shaks hi Agar De Daga Tu kaisa Lage Ga....

      Kis Ki Kya Majal Thi Jo Koi Hum Ko Kharid Sakta Faraz,..Hum Tu Khud Hi Bik Gaye Kharidar DekhKe..?

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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      حرمتِ حرف نہیں ہے سو یہ ارزانی ہے
      ورنہ وہ دن بھی تھے جب خوابِ گراں تھے ہم بھی



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