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    Thread: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

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      Bubble Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اسلام وعلیکم
      ایک نئے سلسلے کے آغاز کے ساتھ حاضرِ خدمت ہوں
      جیسا کہ تھریڈ کے عنوان سے ظاہر ہے شعر کے جواب میں شعر لکھنا ہے

      مثال کے طو پر

      وہی جواں ہے قبیلے کی آنکھ کا تارا
      شباب جس کا ہے بے
      داغ ،ضرب ہے کاری


      دلِ بیدار پیدا کر کہ دل خوابیدہ ہے جب تک
      نہ تیری ضرب ہے کاری نہ میرے ضرب ہے کاری


      آخری حرف کی کوئی قید نہیں لیکن صرف شعر ہی مقابلے میں شامل کئے جائیں
      قطعات ہرگز نہیں

      پہلا شعر میری طرف سے

      سورج کو ابھرنے نہیں دیتا ترا حبشی
      بے زر کو ابو ذر تری بخشش نے کیا ہے


      اب آپ کی باری


      Last edited by Mamin Mirza; 01-09-2016 at 10:24 AM.
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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by _Alex_ View Post
      Rony Ki Saza Hai Na Rulany Ki Saza Hai
      Ye Dard-E-Mohabbat Ko Nibhany Ki Saza Hai
      Hansty Hain To Aankhon Se Nikal Aty Hain Ansoo
      Ye Ek Shakhs Ko Be-Intiha Chahny Ki Waja Hai...
      Ham Ne Chehray Pe Sajaa Rakhi Hai Sheher Ki Ronaq
      Dil Ka Aalam Hai Veeraan Jazeeron Jaisa..!!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Hansne pe bhi aa jaate hain besaakhta aansoo,
      kuchh log mujhe aisi dua de ke gaye hain …!
      Kahin Pe Dard Ki Jheelain, Kahin Lahje Ki Karwahaten...!!
      Suno! Main Khush To Hoon Lekin Mera Har Lafz Rota Hai


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      اب تو خوشی کا غم ہے نہ غم کی خوشی مجھے
      بے حس بنا چکی ہے بہت زندگی مجھے
      وہ وقت بھی خدا نہ دکھائے کبھی مجھے
      ان کی ندامتوں پہ ہو شرمندگی مجھے










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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      Kahin Pe Dard Ki Jheelain, Kahin Lahje Ki Karwahaten...!!
      Suno! Main Khush To Hoon Lekin Mera Har Lafz Rota Hai
      Khubsurat as always


      harikqayāshaqīqatseduur-tarniklā


      kitābkānakoīdarsmo'tabarniklā


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by maya View Post
      Ham Ne Chehray Pe Sajaa Rakhi Hai Sheher Ki Ronaq
      Dil Ka Aalam Hai Veeraan Jazeeron Jaisa..!!
      Saja kar apni hi aankh hazaar chehron pe,
      kiya hai maine sadaa aitbaar chehron pe.
      Main teri bazm mein kis kis se dushmani leta?
      likha tha naam tera be’shumaar chehron pe …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Khyaalon mein wahi, sapno mein wahi
      lekin unki yaadon mein hum the hi nahin
      Hum jaagte rahe duniya soti rahi
      ek baarish hi thi, jo humare saath roti rahi …!


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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Main toh ek dard hun saahab !
      aur dard bhala kaun sehta hai .. ?



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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Har Jurm Meri Zaat Say Mansoob Huwa Hai…
      Kya Mere Siwa Shehr Mein Masoom Hain Saare
      Quote Originally Posted by intelligent086 View Post
      اب تو خوشی کا غم ہے نہ غم کی خوشی مجھے
      بے حس بنا چکی ہے بہت زندگی مجھے
      وہ وقت بھی خدا نہ دکھائے کبھی مجھے
      ان کی ندامتوں پہ ہو شرمندگی مجھے










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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Har Jurm Meri Zaat Say Mansoob Huwa Hai…
      Kya Mere Siwa Shehr Mein Masoom Hain Saare
      Quote Originally Posted by intelligent086 View Post
      اب تو خوشی کا غم ہے نہ غم کی خوشی مجھے
      بے حس بنا چکی ہے بہت زندگی مجھے
      وہ وقت بھی خدا نہ دکھائے کبھی مجھے
      ان کی ندامتوں پہ ہو شرمندگی مجھے










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      Re: Shair Ka Jawab Shair say..............!!!

      Quote Originally Posted by Aliza View Post
      Khubsurat as always


      har ikqayāshaqīqatseduur-tarniklā


      kitābkānakoīdarsmo'tabarniklā
      thanxsiso shair samjh nahi aaya:D


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