buhat hi achi koshish hai jii ,bas jjiii bewafa na leekha karin koi or Alfaz use keya karin
koi apne mehboob koi befaa nahi kehta ,pata nahi kaya majboori ho gi ,,,,,,?
maind ni karna,,,
salam
bohot din baad online hon
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buhat hi achi koshish hai jii ,bas jjiii bewafa na leekha karin koi or Alfaz use keya karin
koi apne mehboob koi befaa nahi kehta ,pata nahi kaya majboori ho gi ,,,,,,?
maind ni karna,,,
Buhat pyari sharing
اعتماد " ایک چھوٹا سا لفظ ھے ، جسے
پڑھنے میں سیکنڈ
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Good poetry by u. And good design g
SAB kuch acha hai SP..ye background main kia koora karkit sajaay a hai
Yaad Rakhna to kher Wafa ki nishani hoti hy.................Sher thory Be Wazan lagey.........!!!lekin achi koshish hy....!!!!
Baqi Sher jitny dukhi ,ranjeeda or Yasiyat me liptey hoey hain............Text,Background utny hi shokh,chamakdaar rangoon me poetry k saath match nhi ho rahy....!!!
Nice effort...........!!!!!!
Itne chup chaap k raste b rahain gain la- ilm.......!!!
Chhor jayein gain kissi rouz nagar shaam k baad...!!!
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